The draft can be found here. A related document concerning the history of the guidelines and their purpose can be found here.
In addition to general remarks, Geoff Lomax, senior officer for the CIRM Standards Working Group, is asking for comments on the following:
"The utility of the guidelines for reviewing studies proposing to obtain oocytes for researchThe impact of these guidelines will go well beyond California, which is currently in the global forefront of setting standards for human embryonic stem cell research. Seeking comment at early stage and posting the information on its web site serves CIRM well, opening the door to all who are interested or who have something at stake. Sphere: Related Content
"The consistency of the guidelines with current clinical protocols and standards of care
"General feasibility considerations with the draft guidelines."